My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn’t found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head, says it was too hard to remember new word. He enjoyed watching TV, playing cards, smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all this habits. Not long ago, he went to look for a job. When he knew talents were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. He told me how he wished he has worked hard in college and asked me not to copy his example.
【1】.“從大學畢業”graduate from college，因此graduate 后加介詞from。
【6】多個新單詞是名詞，應該用復數形式， word→words 。
【9】 定語從句中不用what，that引導定語從句作賓語，what是多余的，去掉what 。